DemonEye's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FF Bitmap Adventure 1]

Well, i do have one or two suggestions...

1: make the sprites match the backgrounds. Final Fantasy sprites don't really go well with Mario RPG backgrounds.

2: ive the sprites some animation. All i saw was tweening. It takes very little effort to do that, and it's not very fun to watch. Animate the sprites a little.

3: Finish it BEFORE you submit it. It's completely pointless to submit a movie before it's finished. I mean, COMPLETELY pointless.

["The Matrix has you"]

Traced.

This was completely traced. I've seen those exact same scenes before.

[Powerup Stick]

I'll try to review this as best i can...

pros:

-good art
-swords

cons:

-text goes way too fast
-REALLY bad frame rate
-no sound
-no real animation, besides the clouds.

I would reccomend a few things: adding sound, making the frame rate 20-30 fps, making the swords actually have some decent movement, and making the text stay longer on the screen.

IMPORTANT NOTE:

Before you submit your movies to newgrounds, WATCH THE MOVIE YOURSELF and ask yourself "Is this a good movie? If not, what needs to be changed?"

NoshuClock responds:

THanks ill make sure to fix the real movie up and its gona be great, i ddint put any sound in it cuz i dont know how to but ill be sure to learn and ill put it into the real movie

[Final Fantasy Gil Quest]

Perfect!

"Olsen twins?? KILL!"

hilarious. This should get daily feature. A bit long, but who freakin cares? I loved this.

[Damsel in distress]

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Better than most of the crap in the portal, at least. Well, it made me laugh. I liked it. You are talented. Even though i despise Johnny Bravo and everything about him, it was still amusing.

SantoNinoDeCebu responds:

Glad you found it amusing(which it was supposed to be)
Johnny Bravo is the man! I just laugh at almost any day time cartoons.

[.:Pac-Man Short:.]

That's great.

It's nice to see a funny little short every once in a while. Very good.

asshole2 responds:

Hey! thats demoneye from the VGDC forum! thanks for reviewing my movie :)

[Metroid Flash Edition]

Very nice, my friend. Very nice.

Great art. Dialog was a bit lame, but it was still great! Finish it! NOW!

[ZeroVsSigma]

Too short for it's file size.

It was good, but you gotta shrink that file size down a notch. Use golwave to edit the song.

Otherwise, it was pretty good, but too short.

Nail responds:

it was mostly the sprites that boosted the bandwidth